What is the title of your report?
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The roar of the mountain
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Introduction:
Introduce your topic by writing two interesting facts about the Tongariro eruption that will hook in the reader. Remember to explain what a volcanic eruption is.
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Mt Tongariro has surged to life and has caused major damage.Thick layers of ash covers the sky and makes it hard for animals to breath.People say that it looks like a warrior spewing flames or A bear filled with rage.
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Second paragraph: Write 3 sentences explaining what you can see/hear. Include the date/time it started and who is affected by it.
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People can see ash coming out of its mouth and cars and some houses covered in the blanket of ash.They could hear something that sounded like a earthquake.They were shocked and some people watched it,Unfortunately the pressure of some people builds up.
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Third paragraph:
Write a paragraph telling your audience about 2 or 3 facts about what happened during the eruption.
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People were running for cover as people were hiking up the mountains.As soon as people heard it they ran with shock.The animals were scared,for some it was a first time experience.There was difficult damage ad some damage hard to repair.Aeroplanes and cars were not allowed to leave util further notice.
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Fourth paragraph:
Write a paragraph telling your audience what damage was caused and how the surrounding land/people were affected.
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The damage that was caused was that it has harmed farmers animals even locals houses and cars were covered in the black blanket of ash.Even though they could not get the warning the sound of civilians running with fear would be the warning to run .
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Fifth paragraph:
Write a paragraph telling what the people that live near Mt Tongariro think about what is happening. What did they do when they heard the first warnings
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The people were listening btu scientist were first to find out but no one knew what caused this warrior to erupt.It’s shocking news because no one knows and scientists are still figuring it out.The volcano caused significant damage to near tramping area
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Conclusion:
End your information report with a recommendation that tells what next for those affected by the eruption.
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The next time a volcano erupts remember to have safety equipment- ready for horrifying disasters
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Monday 23 September 2013
Tongariro eruption report
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